1. प्रथम अध्याय :

आज नवंबर माह की शुक्ल पक्ष की चतुर्थी है और आज ही है संध्या का विवाह ।
“याद रखना बिट्टो , जो मैंने सिखाया तुझे। सास ही अब तेरी माँ है और ससुर पिता। वैसे ही ख्याल रखना जैसे हमारा रखती हो , बल्कि प्रयास करना की हमसे भी ज्यादा ध्यान रखो उनका। “
माँ ने प्रेम से संध्या के गालो को सहलाया। लाल जोड़े में ढकी दुल्हन के गुलाबी चेहरे से दो मोती अपना आशियाना छोड़ के माँ के आँचल में समां गए। “देख बिट्टो ,हमारा सर कभी भी शर्म से ना झुकने पाये।”
संध्या ने भरी पलकों से सर हिला कर मूक हामी भरी। अश्रु के झीने परदे के पीछे से माँ का चेहरा धुंधला दिखता था ।
“और हाँ , याद रखना बिट्टो, आदमी के दिल का रास्ता पेट से हो कर जाता है। ” माँ ने अपने सुखी वैवाहिक जीवन का सार एक वाक्य में समेट दिया।
माँ की सीख की पोटली लिए भारी मन से संध्या ने मायके से विदा ली।
(क्रमश:)
(दूसरा भाग :https://hemagusain27.wordpress.com/2015/09/09)
I see this as a beginning of something amazing to follow. Your command on Hindi is fabulous. Keep it up, Hema 🙂
I have something in my mind TJ,this girl Sandhya’s story is the story of an ordinary woman in India or may be in other countries. Her journey through thick and thin..happy reading and Thank you. 🙂
Even though it may not seem like a new brand of a concept, but your language, choice of words and the pictorial representation will make it special. Best Wishes! 🙂
Wow it’s a great start 🙂 Looking forward to read more of this story 🙂 Great going 🙂
And Wow that was so fast..NJ,I hadn’t expected that fast comment from anybody. Thank you.
And here is the beginning of a beautiful novelet! Your Hindi is envious to say the least….I think one of the best Hindi I’ve read since childhood….Beginning from Akhri Note to this one, you stun me with your usage of words. You have all the qualities to be a great Hindi writer one day…so keep chasing your dreams.
I do hope that this turns into a good read. Thanks for supporting me always. I got the courage to write in hindi because of friends like you ,TJ and new found talents NJ and Nimz…Thank you all from the bottom of my heart.
Hema… ❤ ❤
Waiting for that awesome novelet… 🙂
You know, After school I never read anything related to Hindi Literature.. I guess, its after 8 years I read Hindi through your Aakhri Note..
And now whenever your post pops up I will leave everything else and will read it.. 🙂
This one is awesome… As you said, this happens to every Indian Women…
You are great with Hindi words dear… Tremendous.. 🙂
Keep writing.. ❤ 🙂
Nimz.. 🙂
Love you..for making me feel that my posts are worth reading..
I dare write in Hindi because of you guys who not only read it but encourage me with lovely words..
Thank you so very much.. Lots n lots of Love and hugs.. 🙂
You deserve this lovely words dear.. You are such an amazing one..
Love you always..
Tons of Hugs & Kisses.. 🙂